[Weebl]

Last one is out of focus and should be portrait instead of landscape. Re-shoot.



Work on your shutter speed, some are slightly blurry. A few are slightly overexposed and a bit washed out, especially the first. On six of them you have something else drawing away from her face or something going through her head. You have to watch that for portraits. The concrete edge is dead center of the photo, which makes that the focal point. I like the one where she is in the "window" but she is too low in the picture, it looks to me like she is an accessory to the window.